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Saint and Sinner by *elonweis:iconelonweis:

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©2002-2009 *elonweis
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Submitted: August 22, 2002
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Yes, suffer my writing... another guilt submission.

Okay... the first text version didn't work as a submission, so here's the second version. The poem can be read column by column or straight across or each column by itself. Yes, 4 (sorta) poems in one!

Interpertations?

poem: emotive
image: pencil, tablet & painter 6.o
assembled in: photoshop
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~al-b:iconal-b: Aug 22, 2002, 10:25:15 PM
Impressive layout! Two ways to read it, both work! Your background is wonderful aswell.

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:police: WARNING: [link] May Contain :censored: :eyepopping: :poo:
~fox718:iconfox718: Aug 22, 2002, 10:26:17 PM
My friend sent me here and im glad she did! You have a very creative style, and I love the setup. This is a great piece!

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You know, I wish I had something interesting to say.
But I don't.
~iprrly:iconiprrly: Aug 22, 2002, 11:19:34 PM
wow no words but wow...........................................

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The world is a cold and lonely place beyond hope, beyond care. -Ryoga Hibiki
:penguin: :tux: :tux::penguin:
~mr-mister:iconmr-mister: Aug 23, 2002, 12:22:09 AM
fei dear.. this is really neato. you can read it straight across or you can read the columns seperately or just scramble all the words together cuz my head is very mushy now and you've further stirred it :o (Eek)
~skavskril:iconskavskril: Aug 23, 2002, 4:03:53 AM
They each stand alone well .. but you dont seem to get the full effect unless they are together. Like so many things. ;) (Wink)

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:gummybear: "If procrastination were an art form, would that make me Dali?" :gummybear:
~mijka:iconmijka: Aug 23, 2002, 7:58:27 AM
meh. I spend entirely too much time haunting your gallery -_-; DAMN YOU FOR BEING SO TALENTED Kata-kun! ;) (Wink)

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Murphy was right.

He was bastard.

But he was right. :P
~dinocat:icondinocat: Aug 23, 2002, 8:44:58 AM
Lick me please!

i'll tell ya what i think laterz chica..*smiles*...but artistically critin...well..you did an amazing job on this one...the layout is perfect for the piece...the placement of the lines themselves mimic the meanings within....similar in style to "a twisted tail" i think that's the name...and the back ground is well illustrated as always and fabulously colored..you faded it just enough to not distract from the poem but not enough to loose what is beautiful about it..hurrm..you get a second lick..just cause you did so damn good on this one..

Lick me please!

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- not so recent phone conversation -

friend: "How y'doin?"
me: "I'm in a bath...with a beer...and a rubber ducky."
friend: "...er...had a long day at work?"
me: "........I'm in a bath...with a beer...and a rubber ducky."
:icontwotonearmy:
~laya:iconlaya: Aug 23, 2002, 9:37:40 AM
i'm gonna have to agree with dinocat !

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"you are not a beautiful & unique snow flake... you have to give up...you are not your fucking khakis..."-Chuck Palahniuk/Fight Club (film)
~flatrabbit:iconflatrabbit: Aug 23, 2002, 9:45:07 AM
i truely like this poem, but the layout really catches me....

again im glad i +watched you. it really has been worthwhile.



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Indecision is the key to flexibility. But im not sure about that.
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